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    :iconnotobsessive:
    your poems are amazing. i kinda feel honored that you would even take the time to read mine. lol.

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    "To live and not to breathe,
    Is to die in tragedy.
    To run, to run away.
    To find what you believe,"
    (Jesus of Suburbia- Green Day)
    :iconnamenotimportant:
    I love to write poetry, but over time, I tire of my own bullshit. By "my bullshit" I mean my rants and remonstrances...over time it all seems...well...looping and pointless. However, the simple joy of creating the work is enough to warrant my continued indulgence. When I receive encouragement such as yours, it helps me to continue to write.

    So thank you.
    :iconnotobsessive:
    aww, thats so nice. no matter where you are in life, if you have the gift, use it! not many people have it so, STRUT YOUR STUFF! woo hoo! hope my encouragment keeps ya writing... glad to help :P

    --
    "To live and not to breathe,
    Is to die in tragedy.
    To run, to run away.
    To find what you believe,"
    (Jesus of Suburbia- Green Day)
    :iconbrooksyslittlesister:
    Hey thankyee for the watch... Tis much apreciated... :hug:

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    Never forget the milk...

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    But where are we going to find a hose and a duck at this hour?
    :iconchaos-jelly:
    The imagery of your work is difficult to decipher without knowledge of its writer.

    I would like to have commented on individual poems, but I'm afraid I might gather unwarented assumptions without continued exposure.

    In other words: I'm watching you. Oh yes... I'm always watching.

    O.O

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    breathe slow
    :iconnamenotimportant:
    Difficult to decipher? "My Hour of Wealth", which was written long ago, reads like a cheesy childs poem to me now, but snatches of it still stir the meaning up in me.
    "The Night and the Silent Water" however, has gone through many many drafts, and now bears little resemblence to the original poem. Looking at it now that I've posted it, I can see how it would be meaningless to anyone but myself. But that's what I love about poetry; projecting a deep personal feeling out into the abyss, and wondering if on some off chance, someone might understand you. Hell, I could write a poem about that, I love it so much.
    Thank you for your feedback. I shall keep it in mind.
    :iconchaos-jelly:
    I definately pick up fealings and impressions from the poetry. The thing hich fascinates me is that I really have no way of knowing whether the impressions I'm getting are the same as yours.

    Revising poetry can have interesting results... the memory of what was written before effects the way it is now read, no?

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    breathe slow
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