

World ChangedI've seen before a world changed Where countless things are walkingWorld Changed
They wander, violent and deranged Not feeling, thinking, talking
They fed on man himself until Their numbers grew untold
Roads and cities, quiet, still I lived to world's end behold
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Terror seized me at their sight And strength and anger came
I fled or stood my ground to fight When they sought my life to claim
A living pride kindled me From unguessed depths inside
Striving with death, it came to be... I was at last alive &nbs


Dark Beautiful GemsSome hours are for stern and brooding thought With eyes that stare vacant and blind Seeing old faces and sorrows bought Through the inward bent eye of the mindDark Beautiful Gems
Recreating to perfect perfection as well As is afforded by memory The quiver in the eye of the man who fell As his own death he did see
Reliving countless times over again Strike of blow, or breathing of word In fell mood aimed at beloved friend And their recoiling at wound undeserved
Or hearing the frantic rasping breath Of dying creature found Thoughtless terror occupies the last


CrazyWhat a crazy life we live here,Crazy
oh it does amaze me
Reckon it all at once I fear,
my mind it gets hazey
From breasts that bounce, to savings accounts And time-space holes, to cereal bowls... From beloved's death rueing, to the act of chewing To patterns in rising smoke one beholds
What a crazy life we live here,
and maybe this should phase me,
But that's just how I likes it, baby...
..........Crazy.


Weakness?I am my brain ---> My brain is matter ---> E=mc2 ---> Conservation of EnergyWeakness?
"Weakness?"
Hours of thought and brooding yield fruit Reassure that I don't wander blind
But Gingerly I can only hold those truths Fearing how they reduce my hand and mind
The uttermost end of wisdom bestowes gifts Seeming beyond my will to use or bear
To be born new and complete it promises But I fear the death of my beloved self there
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"To live and not to breathe,
Is to die in tragedy.
To run, to run away.
To find what you believe,"
(Jesus of Suburbia- Green Day)
So thank you.
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"To live and not to breathe,
Is to die in tragedy.
To run, to run away.
To find what you believe,"
(Jesus of Suburbia- Green Day)
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Never forget the milk...
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But where are we going to find a hose and a duck at this hour?
I would like to have commented on individual poems, but I'm afraid I might gather unwarented assumptions without continued exposure.
In other words: I'm watching you. Oh yes... I'm always watching.
O.O
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breathe slow
"The Night and the Silent Water" however, has gone through many many drafts, and now bears little resemblence to the original poem. Looking at it now that I've posted it, I can see how it would be meaningless to anyone but myself. But that's what I love about poetry; projecting a deep personal feeling out into the abyss, and wondering if on some off chance, someone might understand you. Hell, I could write a poem about that, I love it so much.
Thank you for your feedback. I shall keep it in mind.
Revising poetry can have interesting results... the memory of what was written before effects the way it is now read, no?
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breathe slow
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